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PostPosted: Sat Jan 30, 2010 11:32 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

You are lucky, Ulkurz. Few experience so much of Tae Kwan Leep so soon.
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PostPosted: Sat Jan 30, 2010 5:06 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Yay new pages! <3
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PostPosted: Sat Jan 30, 2010 6:02 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Ooh, that looks painful. o_o Hoof to the face!
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PostPosted: Mon Feb 15, 2010 12:21 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Monday, January 15th 2010

OUCH!
People we have a leg-biter, shame on Bel for not training his pets to behave whilst in a company.
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PostPosted: Mon Feb 15, 2010 1:44 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Poison you say? Twisted Evil
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PostPosted: Mon Feb 15, 2010 1:59 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

That is a lot of very sharp teeth.

Jus' sayin'.
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PostPosted: Tue Feb 16, 2010 1:26 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Nanashi's attack Bel!!! She has to be!!

Or Skogul, or Tristram... More likely Tristram if not Bel...since he was the one to kidnap Willow...not that Nanashi seems to care about Willow that much...but she IS Earthsong's eve...

And as noted, Ulkurz is being outrageously impolite. Something tells me He's going to get fireballed in the head and that same thing tells me Ulkurz isn't going to phase in time to avoid it. muhahahah XD Twisted Evil
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PostPosted: Tue Feb 16, 2010 2:27 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I forsee some human-torch-like consequences. Only demon-torch-like. Twisted Evil
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PostPosted: Tue Feb 16, 2010 2:53 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Yays! A page (Feb 15)! And I second the plea to Go Canada (the opening was awesome/chessy as expected), although everyone knows the games is very political now....

Anyways to this page:
panel 1: While I don't really see the action of U slipping away, the thin action lines do help as well as the sound effects.
panel 2: This is good. Having Z sneak up on U like that is a great way to add drama and suspense as to if U is going to be able to defend himself from what Z may do.
panel 3: The creepy half open eye also works well here. To the same effect.
panel 4: This panel is funny. I'm not sure if it's supposed to be...Just the idea of U trying to bite Z's great foot with a snarl amidst orange light. And the fact that Z's greatly thick foot then cries out in agony....Um. Yes.
panel 5: Oooh. Nanashi. I was hoping to see her again she is way cool. Leaping over black streams and jumping 4 feet into the air while holding a heavy fighting object just in the earlier pages. No, I actually do like her. And it should be interesting to see how she carries out this plan.
(And the glowing eyes look awesome on her.)...
The motions lines are moving upwards; is she still jumping upwards from that last page? Truly ultra-human.
panel 6: And Bel and E duke it out. For a great big shiny battle with starting run including having their minions are fighting one another, I sort of expected something more...grand than what appears to be a intimate close-range slap slap. The sound effects and angle to make it somewhat grand though.

Anyhow. ^ My thoughts. Nanashi is still awesome. And I can't wait to see what she's going to do here.
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PostPosted: Tue Feb 16, 2010 7:41 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

The Sneak Attack strikes again!!

No one is safe...
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PostPosted: Wed Feb 17, 2010 4:36 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Virturealm wrote:
The Sneak Attack strikes again!!

No one is safe...


Especially no one's foot.
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PostPosted: Tue Feb 23, 2010 12:19 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

2010 February, Page 56

Panel 1: This panel is win. The action of Nanashi leaping while Bel and Earthsong continue their fight below is positioned very nicely. Ephasising the grandness of Bel and Earthsong's fight while having Nanashi about her target is very good.
Panel 2: Because I expected more Nanashi-Bel-Earthsong action, I guess I'm a bit let down here, but...Wait, who's boot is that? Not Gwen, Banshee girl, U, Z, Alyss, Nanashi...Ok no one on Haven's Guard...(compares with white hair, light brown skin in Panel 4), so I guess that's Skogul...I was wondering when she'd return to the action.
Panel 3: So the boot pushes off the ground with a wooshing sound...

(I;m not done but I'll continue this later....)
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PostPosted: Tue Feb 23, 2010 1:23 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

and the glowing eye with the white eyebrow is also Skogul.
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PostPosted: Tue Feb 23, 2010 3:15 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

"And as Nanashi leaps to attack Bel, Skogul spies her and whirls!!"

"And then the two face off, to Skogul's glee. Meanwhile, Tristram is attempting to sneak Willow out of the lair..."

<3! Wistful thinking! I think Nanashi's is/will be at a disadvantage though, for some reason...

and Tristram is definitely rescuing Willow! He must be! Exclamation
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PostPosted: Tue Feb 23, 2010 3:26 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Just want to apologise about not responding to a lot *coughMOSTcough* of the comments made in this thread. I DO read them, but I invariably seem to wind up being interrupted by either child #1 or #2 and never remember to come back to the thread since it's de-highlighted the next time I come to the forum.

Excuses, excuses.

Anyhow, thank you all for the comments, be they compliments, criticisms or a mix of the two. I appreciate that you're all still reading along given the sporadic nature of the updates now.
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