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Tyris

Joined: 14 Apr 2008 Posts: 760 Location: Beneath a vast mound of curly hair
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Posted: Sat Jan 30, 2010 11:32 am Post subject: |
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You are lucky, Ulkurz. Few experience so much of Tae Kwan Leep so soon. _________________ You can't look dignified when you're having fun.
Dubbed "Tetris" by Asa... apparently.
Keeper of Nanashi's ghostly blue visage and Felucca's hypothetical ejecting nose-cone.
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Violabelle

Joined: 23 Mar 2008 Posts: 169 Location: Springtime
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Posted: Sat Jan 30, 2010 5:06 pm Post subject: |
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Yay new pages! <3 _________________
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Tamir

Joined: 22 Mar 2008 Posts: 1535 Location: Israel
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Posted: Sat Jan 30, 2010 6:02 pm Post subject: |
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| Ooh, that looks painful. o_o Hoof to the face! |
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sinesdex
Joined: 12 May 2009 Posts: 61
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Posted: Mon Feb 15, 2010 12:21 pm Post subject: |
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Monday, January 15th 2010
OUCH!
People we have a leg-biter, shame on Bel for not training his pets to behave whilst in a company. _________________ mister as dubbed by AsA
Proud owner of Neuria's whoosh and Zaebos' ever incredible ponytail
"Justice is selfcontradictory fable, invented by those who are too cowardly to look within themselves into the darkness of every human harth." |
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Nem

Joined: 14 Apr 2008 Posts: 1358 Location: Scotland
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Posted: Mon Feb 15, 2010 1:44 pm Post subject: |
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Poison you say?  _________________ 'Play with a furry animal for a half an hour.' - AsA
Horatio Jackson: I'm afraid, sir, that you have a rather weak grasp of reality.
Baron Munchausen: Your reality, sir, is lies and balderdash, and I am delighted to say that I have no grasp of it whatsoever!
- The Adventures of Baron Munchausen
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Asa

Joined: 10 Apr 2008 Posts: 2351 Location: Grammar Police HQ. Watch your language, I'm armed with the NYTimes Style Book AND Strunk and White!
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Posted: Mon Feb 15, 2010 1:59 pm Post subject: |
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That is a lot of very sharp teeth.
Jus' sayin'. _________________ Self-styled Forum Grandmother, because I hand out nicknames and hugs whether you want them or not. ^_^
Keeper of the Library and the Gateway to Haven
Nem: "It's the sort of face you just know is getting ready to poke you with something sharp."
BS: "...then insist you eat a brownie."
__________________
If we shadows have offended,
Think but this and all is mended...
Give me your hands if we be friends,
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inked.silver
Joined: 09 May 2009 Posts: 48
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Posted: Tue Feb 16, 2010 1:26 am Post subject: |
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Nanashi's attack Bel!!! She has to be!!
Or Skogul, or Tristram... More likely Tristram if not Bel...since he was the one to kidnap Willow...not that Nanashi seems to care about Willow that much...but she IS Earthsong's eve...
And as noted, Ulkurz is being outrageously impolite. Something tells me He's going to get fireballed in the head and that same thing tells me Ulkurz isn't going to phase in time to avoid it. muhahahah XD  |
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Maeniel

Joined: 22 Mar 2008 Posts: 884 Location: Next to Waldo
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Posted: Tue Feb 16, 2010 2:27 am Post subject: |
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I forsee some human-torch-like consequences. Only demon-torch-like.  _________________ Keeper of Zaebos' and Jormand's powers.
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clemon

Joined: 30 Nov 2009 Posts: 64
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Posted: Tue Feb 16, 2010 2:53 am Post subject: |
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Yays! A page (Feb 15)! And I second the plea to Go Canada (the opening was awesome/chessy as expected), although everyone knows the games is very political now....
Anyways to this page:
panel 1: While I don't really see the action of U slipping away, the thin action lines do help as well as the sound effects.
panel 2: This is good. Having Z sneak up on U like that is a great way to add drama and suspense as to if U is going to be able to defend himself from what Z may do.
panel 3: The creepy half open eye also works well here. To the same effect.
panel 4: This panel is funny. I'm not sure if it's supposed to be...Just the idea of U trying to bite Z's great foot with a snarl amidst orange light. And the fact that Z's greatly thick foot then cries out in agony....Um. Yes.
panel 5: Oooh. Nanashi. I was hoping to see her again she is way cool. Leaping over black streams and jumping 4 feet into the air while holding a heavy fighting object just in the earlier pages. No, I actually do like her. And it should be interesting to see how she carries out this plan.
(And the glowing eyes look awesome on her.)...
The motions lines are moving upwards; is she still jumping upwards from that last page? Truly ultra-human.
panel 6: And Bel and E duke it out. For a great big shiny battle with starting run including having their minions are fighting one another, I sort of expected something more...grand than what appears to be a intimate close-range slap slap. The sound effects and angle to make it somewhat grand though.
Anyhow. ^ My thoughts. Nanashi is still awesome. And I can't wait to see what she's going to do here. _________________ Dubbed Langhorn by Asa
After Samuel Langhorne Clemens, or Mark Twain
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Virturealm

Joined: 22 Mar 2008 Posts: 162 Location: OH!
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Posted: Tue Feb 16, 2010 7:41 am Post subject: |
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The Sneak Attack strikes again!!
No one is safe... _________________ {[Number One Perpetual Half Lurker Pseudo Regular]}
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clemon

Joined: 30 Nov 2009 Posts: 64
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Posted: Wed Feb 17, 2010 4:36 am Post subject: |
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| Virturealm wrote: | The Sneak Attack strikes again!!
No one is safe... |
Especially no one's foot. _________________ Dubbed Langhorn by Asa
After Samuel Langhorne Clemens, or Mark Twain
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clemon

Joined: 30 Nov 2009 Posts: 64
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Posted: Tue Feb 23, 2010 12:19 am Post subject: |
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2010 February, Page 56
Panel 1: This panel is win. The action of Nanashi leaping while Bel and Earthsong continue their fight below is positioned very nicely. Ephasising the grandness of Bel and Earthsong's fight while having Nanashi about her target is very good.
Panel 2: Because I expected more Nanashi-Bel-Earthsong action, I guess I'm a bit let down here, but...Wait, who's boot is that? Not Gwen, Banshee girl, U, Z, Alyss, Nanashi...Ok no one on Haven's Guard...(compares with white hair, light brown skin in Panel 4), so I guess that's Skogul...I was wondering when she'd return to the action.
Panel 3: So the boot pushes off the ground with a wooshing sound...
(I;m not done but I'll continue this later....) _________________ Dubbed Langhorn by Asa
After Samuel Langhorne Clemens, or Mark Twain
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Asa

Joined: 10 Apr 2008 Posts: 2351 Location: Grammar Police HQ. Watch your language, I'm armed with the NYTimes Style Book AND Strunk and White!
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Posted: Tue Feb 23, 2010 1:23 am Post subject: |
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and the glowing eye with the white eyebrow is also Skogul. _________________ Self-styled Forum Grandmother, because I hand out nicknames and hugs whether you want them or not. ^_^
Keeper of the Library and the Gateway to Haven
Nem: "It's the sort of face you just know is getting ready to poke you with something sharp."
BS: "...then insist you eat a brownie."
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If we shadows have offended,
Think but this and all is mended...
Give me your hands if we be friends,
And Robin shall restore amends. |
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inked.silver
Joined: 09 May 2009 Posts: 48
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Posted: Tue Feb 23, 2010 3:15 am Post subject: |
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"And as Nanashi leaps to attack Bel, Skogul spies her and whirls!!"
"And then the two face off, to Skogul's glee. Meanwhile, Tristram is attempting to sneak Willow out of the lair..."
<3! Wistful thinking! I think Nanashi's is/will be at a disadvantage though, for some reason...
and Tristram is definitely rescuing Willow! He must be!  |
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YatesOfYore Site Admin

Joined: 27 Dec 2006 Posts: 633
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Posted: Tue Feb 23, 2010 3:26 am Post subject: |
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Just want to apologise about not responding to a lot *coughMOSTcough* of the comments made in this thread. I DO read them, but I invariably seem to wind up being interrupted by either child #1 or #2 and never remember to come back to the thread since it's de-highlighted the next time I come to the forum.
Excuses, excuses.
Anyhow, thank you all for the comments, be they compliments, criticisms or a mix of the two. I appreciate that you're all still reading along given the sporadic nature of the updates now. _________________ Keeper of Nanashi's Vambraces and the Amethyst Trees.
PS: Don't panic! I changed my username - I'm not an impostor! |
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